Individual Response to the Idea

When we Started filming I was really happy with everything from the song choice to the storyboard. After thinking it through I think that the narrative is not very interesting. Right now it is about a couple having a fight and then making up which I think is quite cliché. Instead I had an idea of a woman dying and the man feeling guilty or sad about it by her bed side until she has passed away. I think this idea has more suspense. We will be filming again tomorrow so we will discuss this idea and if we do go ahead with it I think it will be better. All members of the group are not able to come but due to availability of the actors we have no choice but to film ASAP. It has to be done fast as the lighting outside is changing due to weather conditions so we need to film fast and start editing.